Total Pro Basketball Review

druez · 11-27-2003, 08:10 PM

http://www.hoopsology.com/videogames...3?ArticleID=25

cincyreds · 11-28-2003, 05:43 AM

cool!

TroyF · 11-28-2003, 06:02 AM

I don't think I've ever been critical of grammar issues on this board. Maybe once or twice. I don't always have the time to spell check every post I write. I don't even get bothered by the it's/its others do.

Having said that, I think if you are writing a professional review for a website, it might be wise to edit things a little more heavily than you would a post on a message board. The opening line of the review:

We finished up our last episode with Nay Nay loosing in the finals to Florida.

I didn't look for or notice any other errors in the rest of the review. I only skimmed the rest of it though. Seems like a decent game. The reviews from the FOFC group haven't been so good. I doubt I'll have time for it with FOF2004 and CM anyway. This is one I may end up buying a few months down the road if it looks like the necessary improvements have been made.

TroyF

yabanci · 11-28-2003, 06:25 AM

I think this guy writes good, informative reviews. It does need to be proofread more carefully though. Make sure you get this one two:

"The leaders screen basically brakes down the league leaders in various different categories."

Noop · 11-28-2003, 07:28 AM

Its not that good

Samdari · 11-28-2003, 08:29 AM

Yabanci, I am going to assume that your goof was intentional, and thus comic genius.

CraigSca · 11-28-2003, 08:37 AM

I think your loosing it, you two.

Ok...it's a stretch

11-28-2003, 05:43 AM	#2
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11-28-2003, 06:25 AM	#4
yabanci College Benchwarmer Join Date: Jun 2003	I think this guy writes good, informative reviews. It does need to be proofread more carefully though. Make sure you get this one two: "The leaders screen basically brakes down the league leaders in various different categories." Last edited by yabanci : 11-28-2003 at 06:33 AM.

11-28-2003, 07:28 AM	#5
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11-28-2003, 08:29 AM	#6
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11-28-2003, 06:02 AM	#3
TroyF Coordinator Join Date: Oct 2000	I don't think I've ever been critical of grammar issues on this board. Maybe once or twice. I don't always have the time to spell check every post I write. I don't even get bothered by the it's/its others do. Having said that, I think if you are writing a professional review for a website, it might be wise to edit things a little more heavily than you would a post on a message board. The opening line of the review: We finished up our last episode with Nay Nay loosing in the finals to Florida. I didn't look for or notice any other errors in the rest of the review. I only skimmed the rest of it though. Seems like a decent game. The reviews from the FOFC group haven't been so good. I doubt I'll have time for it with FOF2004 and CM anyway. This is one I may end up buying a few months down the road if it looks like the necessary improvements have been made. TroyF

11-28-2003, 08:37 AM	#7
CraigSca Pro Starter Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Not Delaware - hurray!	I think your loosing it, you two. Ok...it's a stretch

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