only found (so far) one lil bit that didn't ring true.
PENNY
Sheldon. You know I care about you.
So please take this in the way it is
intended. You are a freaking lunatic.
I'm just not sure that "freaking lunatic" adds anything there. Maybe just "you're nuts" or "you've lost it" or something...softer. Freaking lunatic is kind of mean-spirited, and it's not really a mean-spirited show.
Other than that little bit...very good. I'd watch it if it was put onscreen!
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