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KWhit · 04-02-2010, 08:58 AM

Thanks BrianD and rowech for giving it a read.

Glad to hear that it felt like a real episode of the show. (Obviously) that's what I'm going for.

Brian: Interesting comment about not getting Howard's nickname. That's the first I've heard that comment. I'll ask a few other people their thoughts on it.

rowech: I don't watch 2.5 men, but I may try to do something like that since Chuck Lorre is the creator of both shows (not sure if you knew that or not), so there is some tie between them. And the wii thing I think already strains the credibility of the story. When I was first writing the script, I tried to make it even more over the top as you suggest, but it just wasn't working. That may be the weakest part of the script, I think.

04-02-2010, 08:58 AM	#9
KWhit Coordinator Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Conyers GA	Thanks BrianD and rowech for giving it a read. Glad to hear that it felt like a real episode of the show. (Obviously) that's what I'm going for. Brian: Interesting comment about not getting Howard's nickname. That's the first I've heard that comment. I'll ask a few other people their thoughts on it. rowech: I don't watch 2.5 men, but I may try to do something like that since Chuck Lorre is the creator of both shows (not sure if you knew that or not), so there is some tie between them. And the wii thing I think already strains the credibility of the story. When I was first writing the script, I tried to make it even more over the top as you suggest, but it just wasn't working. That may be the weakest part of the script, I think.